Mystic

[Mystic]

NAME
Mystic

AGE
28 Moons

GENDER
She-cat

ALLIANCE
Rouge

POSITION


APPEARANCE
Mystic is a black cat. Her tail is longer than other cat tails. Mystic's eyes are a deep shade of forest green. One of her right forepaw is a sliver-ish white color. Her pelt sometimes looks silver in moonlight.

PERSONALITY
Mystic has a natural curiosity. Her mind thinks for itself. Though sometimes she is smart and funny. She loves newborn kits,

HISTORY
When she was in ThunderClan, then known as Mysticflight, she was exiled. She was still a warrior, Mystic tried to have all glory to herself. She always found a way. Then, one time, she tried to kill the leader. The leader then exiled her and Mysticflight had changed her name to Mystic.

RP SAMPLE
Mysticflight padded to the fresh-kill pile. She grabbed a mouse for herself.
"Hello Mysticflight!" meowed a familiar voice.
Mysticflight turned around. "Hi," she meowed, acting innocent. She did her best not to let the Clan know of her scheme. So far so good. she thought, Keep this up and nobody will suspect a thing. "So hows it going, Swiftfeather?"
"Good," he replied.

OTHER

[Neon Blue]

You'll have to change her history, you cannot say that she was once a deputy or that the leader exiled her. That is backwritting history into someone else's character.
Other then that this bio looks great

[Mystic]

Modified it.

[Neon Blue]

She is accepted